When I took off, I got butterflies in my stomach.
It almost made me vomit
When I landed on the moon, I felt weird like I was growing a beard.
But when I took my first step on the moon I was in fear.
When I came back on the ship, I felt like I cut my lip.
It was my first experience on the moon and
I would like to try it again very soon.
Hi AJ this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Collins.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if i would want to walk on the moon but it will be cool if i was the first kid to walk on the moon.
Thanks Mrs Collins for your comment.