Monday, 22 February 2021

Multicultural NZ/ Poem

Multicultural NZ


New Zealand, MMs mixed in a bowl

with colours that are bright 

flags from different cultures fly like a kite   

we also have animals called kiwis

 that come out at night

  

Our foods are nice 

and as good as theirs

but when we eat we feel like millionaires

  

We’re fit as a treadmill

and fast as a bike and when we run 

we feel the power we get from our niks 

                                                          

New Zealand is like yellow, red and green

all the colors in New Zealand make us keen


In New Zealand stormy days are the best 

and when we feel the stormy breeze

 we’ll never be stressed

New Zealand is the best  


By AJ

7 comments:

  1. Hi AJ, I like your post about multicultural keep up the really good work:)

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  2. Hi Aj Its Gideon
    I really like your Multicultural NZ/Poem its like your describing New zealand for everything we like to do anyways keep up the great work and keep up the blogging

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  3. Hi Aj, I enjoyed reading this poem a lot. To be specific I liked the similes you used to compare things to something else. everything you compared was immaculate.

    What do you enjoy doing New Zealand?

    Uinita

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  4. Hello AJ, just wanted to say amazing work on making this poem. I see you have used the 5 elements. Wooww!! Well done :)

    By Soane

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  5. Hi Aj this is a really good poem. I especially like the way that you have rhymed it all. Keep up the great work.

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  6. Hei Aj,
    This some good rhyming poem you got here. Wow Im just so impressed with your words. Keep up the amazing work, Aj:)

    - Maria

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